Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem might such measures cause? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The given table compares the figures of a research on why 100
thousand
UK residents visited overseas from 1994 to 1998 and which countries they travelled during
this
time. It is clear that the majority of UK citizens travelled aboard on their holiday and Western Europe was their most favourite
destination
Suggestion
destinations
. In 1994, about 22
thousand
UK residents travelled to different foreign countries and more than 15
thousand
of them went on their holidays, while the figures for business and visiting relatives was 2
thousand
and 3
thousand
people respectively.
This
number
then
slightly fell until 1998, when it bounced back in almost all of the categories.
Finally
, in 1998, the traveller number reached more than 28
thousand
and among them, about 20
thousand
people travelled to enjoy their holidays. In the
second
table, about 18
thousand
UK travellers went to Western Europe in 1994.
This
number moderately dropped,
then
rose to almost 25
thousand
people in 1998. The figures for travellers that went to North America and the rest of the world
also
saw a
marginally
Suggestion
marginal
decline, which is unnoticeable compared to that of their
counterpart
Suggestion
counterparts
.
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