Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

Experts thought developing and developed countries have debated on whether students spend time on those

activities acquiring

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activities, acquiring

educational input or they ought to play games with leisure atmosphere.

This

essay will discuss both sides of views with illustrating examples of Oxford University and Harvard University

regarding

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regards

modern trend

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the modern trend

of

playgroup

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Playgroup

teaching module and the development of

brain

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the brain

during childhood. Personally, I strongly agree that a child should receive a certain amount of the knowledge through

participanting

taking part in an activity

participating

the well-organized program, which is more beneficial for the neuron connection

developments

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developer

. On the one hand, for those kids who aged between 3 and 8 years old, the establishment of

brain cell connecting network

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a brain cell connecting network

is depending on training their logical thinking and linguistic knowledge during

playing

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play

enjoyable games and events.

For instance

, according to

Oxford University study

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an Oxford University study

shows the test result that a group of students

are

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is

5 to 6 years old who were trained those

knowlegable

highly educated; having extensive information or understanding

knowledgeable

lessons, which their academic results were graded good and excellent. All in all, there is a good prospective arrangement for their future.

On the other hand

, if there is no related

knowledge background

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knowledge, background

putting in the school program, they will only have a single benefit of happy and

enjoyable

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enjoying

school life.

For example

, from the result of the study from the Harvard University, the same age group of teenage

had took

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was taking

part of the relaxing program without any input

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on

the new wording or mathematic task, eventually, their self-esteem was very low among these students after graduation of primary school. To conclude,

although

the scheduled scheme of the event should be added an ingredient of the language and mathematical skill, the educator

do not forget

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does not forget

to prepare in a funny and without

pressure moment

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a pressure moment

of

time slot

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the time slot

time slots

for them to learn the valuable idea and materials. I definitely agree that the tasks contain educational contents in a gaming setting, which provides a better guide for the children's brain and personality development.