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Crime level is increased in many countries, especially within the youth group. Why is this? What can be done to lower the crime rate level?

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These days and ages people face with incrementally increasing level of crime.
However how
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However, how
 these pressing issues may be solved?
This
 essay will illustrate main causes of the delinquency and its possible solutions. There are two main reasons of crime, among which are poverty, alcohol and drug addictions. The scarcity of money may be caused due to unemployment and absence of proper education. One good illustration is requirements for various job positions. You must pertain educational level and skills, which are necessary for one or another job. Physical labour without certain skills is poorly paid.
Also
, alcohol and drug abuse are huge triggers for crime commitments because those bad habits require a huge amount of money immediately.
For instance
, drug addict may organise theft or even robbery in order to get a portion of the drugs.
Consequently
 scarcity of money and bad habits are the main causes of criminality.
However
, there are some methods of tackling
this
 issue.
First
 of all, the government should provide free education for people. It could be courses of mastering the skills which are very required in the country.
For example
, if a state needs qualified electricians, or builders,
then
 those courses must be obtained for free.
Second solution
Suggestion
The second solution
 is for all sorts of addictions. Rehabilitation centres which are free of charge must be set up. They may provide patients with work and useful education for future employment.
Additionally
, these centres must be custodial as some people have a difficult withdrawal period and they try to escape to their previous lifestyle. There is a great example in our city, called "Revitalization". It helped to more than a hundred people.
Consequently
, there solutions can contribute to improving the situation in the country. All in all, so many men, so many opinions, in my view, these solutions are the best medicines for lowering the delinquency rate.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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