Fast food has become so popular worldwide that it is destroying the nutritional quality of food. What do you think because of this the traditional food and cooking method is being forgotten? Do you agree or disagree with the statement give reasons for your answer?
In today’s
fast growing
world, lifestyle is changing so quickly in every aspect of Add a hyphen
fast-growing
human’s
life that it affects negatively in degrading Change noun form
human
the
Change the word
their
overall
health of
Change preposition
apply
themselves
. People have chosen to move towards Correct pronoun usage
apply
junk
foods which became so famous among them that it is diminishing the healthy and nutritious meals
. As per my viewpoint, I do analyse both the
sides of Correct article usage
apply
this
alarming trend and will come to a logical point in the latter view.
To begin
with, members of the
society are enhancing Correct article usage
apply
the
intake of Change the word
their
junk
foods these days due to
hectic job
or business Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
schedule
to focus more on their careers. Fix the agreement mistake
schedules
Similarly
, these days both the person in the family, work and they believed
that cooking Wrong verb form
believe
meals
at home is Correct article usage
a totally
totally
waste of time and they can contribute the same time period for developing innumerable skills to achieve more milestones in their careers. Change the word
total
In addition
to it, food
chain companies which
imposed Correct pronoun usage
apply
high
proportion of funds in making attractive advertisements to bring more customers to consume Correct article usage
a high
burger
, pizza, pasta and so on, but it could lead them to highly contagious diseases Fix the agreement mistake
burgers
such
as tuberculosis, diabetes, heart
problems in the long run. Correct word choice
and heart
For instance
, one of the most popular franchise
“Fix the agreement mistake
franchises
McDonalds
” which is a pioneer in Change noun form
Mcdonald's
Mcdonalds'
the
Correct article usage
apply
junk
food
meals
had
more than 1000 outlets in 150 countries across the globe Wrong verb form
has
had
been found under screening Wrong verb form
has
to
the usage of hazardous additives to taste Change preposition
for
food
in a better way.
Moreover
, persons cannot
able to Verb problem
are not
maintain
a healthy lifestyle of family Wrong verb form
maintaining
due to
more consumption of fast foods which lacks in
full of vitamins and proteins. Verb problem
are
Therefore
, it leads them to various kinds of deficiencies in the physical body which can cause many chronic diseases such
as obesity, low blood pressure, fast aging
and vice versa. To cite an example, in North Change the spelling
ageing
America
more than 80% of citizens choose to grab non-traditional Add a comma
America,
meals
and
out of which 70% Correct word choice
apply
people
are suffering from Change preposition
of people
such
chronic diseases.
To conclude
, as per
my viewpoint, people must follow to intake of traditional home Change preposition
in
food
and not to
opt towards the enhancing trend of Fix the infinitive
apply
junk
meals
as they are
Verb problem
have
less
amount of vitamins, minerals, and proteins which Correct quantifier usage
fewer
is
non-nutritional and Correct subject-verb agreement
are
also
deteriorate the
health in the long run.Correct article usage
apply
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task response
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