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Some people think that because of email and telephone, communication among people is less personal now than it used to be. Do you agree or disagree with that view.

#people #email #telephone #communication
It is considered that telephone and email connection is more increase than the personal treatment which was in the past. I completely agree with
this
 statement, because of the internet gives a lot of opportunity for connecting with people and it is very convenient. On the one hand, nowadays internet is developing fast. Based on
this
, people think that it is more comfortable in order to speak with friends or with relatives. As we knew in the past
this
 kind of technologies had not been before created the internet. Currently we can take an example a lot of programmes which can help to speak each others,
such
 as
facebook
Suggestion
Facebook
,
Accept space
,
telegram, zoom, google meet and other. If they app do not to be nowadays, ways can take much time.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think it is the best invented approach for people, which deserve their time.
On the other hand
,
Submitted by Laziz Janikulov on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Face-to-face interactions
  • Non-verbal cues
  • Emotional depth
  • Digital communication
  • Convenience
  • Time-efficient
  • Misunderstandings
  • Instant messaging
  • Social media
  • Connected
  • Accessibility
  • Swift decision-making
  • Documentation
  • Formal tone
  • Altered the landscape
  • Emotional connection
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