Some people think that because of email and telephone, communication among people is less personal now than it used to be. Do you agree or disagree with that view.

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It is considered that telephone and email connection is more increase than the personal treatment which was in the past. I completely agree with

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statement, because of the internet gives a lot of opportunity for connecting with people and it is very convenient. On the one hand, nowadays internet is developing fast. Based on

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, people think that it is more comfortable in order to speak with friends or with relatives. As we knew in the past

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kind of technologies had not been before created the internet. Currently we can take an example a lot of programmes which can help to speak each others,

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facebook

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telegram, zoom, google meet and other. If they app do not to be nowadays, ways can take much time.

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think it is the best invented approach for people, which deserve their time.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

145 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Face-to-face interactions
Non-verbal cues
Emotional depth
Digital communication
Convenience
Time-efficient
Misunderstandings
Instant messaging
Social media
Connected
Accessibility
Swift decision-making
Documentation
Formal tone
Altered the landscape
Emotional connection

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Some people think that because of email and telephone, communication among people is less personal now than it used to be. Do you agree or disagree with that view.

Fully explain your ideas

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism?

Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects.