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Some people thik that getting a degree from univeristy is the best way to guarantee the job, other believe that it would be better to gain experience first. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is important to consider whether a working
experience
 or higher
qualification
 is more significant to get a better
job
.
Although
 it is
sometime
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
 considered that having a graduate degree may make a person more employable than
one
 who with years of
experience
. In my opinion, I consider that the educational
qualification
 is far more important. On the
one
 side, those who believe that
job
 related skills have
significant role
Suggestion
a significant role
, which make him or her suitable for the particular position.
This
 is because every
job
 has required certain kinds of talents and abilities to
out shine
shine brighter than
outshine
 in their field that often develop through the years of
experience
. Some companies select candidates who have technical
profiency
the quality of having great facility and competence
proficiency
 in the specific field,
for instance
, when recruiting nurses to cardiac ICU, applicants with cardiac
icu
Suggestion
ICU
experience
 may be selected than
one
 who has specialized degree in cardiac nursing. These staff may produce a huge profit to the hospital management.
However
,
one
 the other hand, especially these days, more and more employers look
job
 seekers with higher
qualification
 since their educational
background prepare
Suggestion
background to prepare
 them to take challenges in the
job
 sectors. Up- to- date knowledge and education are crucial to meet the current work place demands than before. As industrial technologies and methods have been evolving, so workers need to be prepared to adopt
such
 changes that can be only possible with educated employees. In conclusion, even though some consider hands on
experience
 is a must to get higher position in a company, others think that educational
qualification
 has the prime role when it comes to choosing the best person to a position.
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