Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to preoccupy themselves. Discuss both these views and and give your opinion.

In recent years, the after school activities for

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children's

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engagement has increased

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in a statistically significant way

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believe

that parents should motivate their offsprings to participate in

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activities in their leisure

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, I would argue to give freedom to the

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in deciding how they want to spend their

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vacation

vacations

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according to their interest. Those who believe in

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engagements would argue that it is crucial to make connections.

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is because, a

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is comprised of children with various interests, and one can learn a lot from them.

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, if a

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is learning any instrument in a music class, chances of getting a motivation from fellow learners are more.

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, children often feel boredom following the same schedule alone, and chances of

quiting

put an end to a state or an activity

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cutting

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the routine are quite high. To add, learning in a

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add many traits in a

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, like how to behave in a team, and makes them more disciplined.

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, it is vital to understand the benefits of keeping the decision to kid itself, the most vital of which is being more confident. The reason

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it is, if a

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is spending

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in the

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and

choosed

pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives

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the act of intervening (as to mediate a dispute, etc.)

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, chances of becoming a good decision maker, and getting success are more.

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, some of them likes to read books and

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does not need a

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engagement. To

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the contrary

, if a

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is forced to attend a

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activity

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against their will, chances of failure are generally more as mostly parents indulge their

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according to their interests and not according to

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child’s skills

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the child’s skills

. In conclusion,

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learning in a

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activity

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possesses a plethora of benefits for a

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, like learning discipline and making new connections, I believe the onus is on parents to give them the flexibility to take decisions on how to spend their

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, as it will make them more confident and mature.