In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree?
It is common that most countries use people with light criminal
offenses
to participate in public services. Even though some believe that every convict should be sentenced a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offence
for
prison time against their crimes, I would argue that it is essential to utilise them in Suggestion
to
communical
concerned with promoting unity among churches or religions
ecumenical
canonical
activites
for a greater benefit.
any specific behavior
activities
Firstly
, sentencing all offenders into an imprisonment will make them anxious and stress. This
is because it allows them to interact with with
other expresses the means used
with
prisoner s
whom may charged with serious crimes a person who is confined; especially a prisoner of war
prisoners
such
as organized crimes and murder will impose a certain negativity on their mentality. For example
, an athlete whom involved with minor case
of Suggestion
a minor case
minor cases
drug
may ultimately end up developing connections with convicts and might later Suggestion
the drug
absorbed
into crime rings. Suggestion
absorb
In contrast
, if such
lighter charged individual used in social activites
any specific behavior
activities
instead
, it will be more beneficial for the society and such
will improve their mind positively avoid involving in such
bad activities further
.
On the other hand
, instead
developing correction facilities the related funding, which could be used in public welfare such
as health care, education and social security as it is expensive to maintain correction facilities for every offender out of government’s money
. As a consequence, more taxpayer money will be needed in order to servicing and expanding prisons. Suggestion
the government’s money
However
, if increase the use felons of lighter crimes in welfare activities, it will be benficial
for the national economy by saving expenses as well by having free labour throughout to use in public promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
benenfit
.
In conclusion, despite many believe that prison is the ultimate destiny for any breach of law and order, it is my firm belief that utilising offenders in social and communal activities will develop their attitudes and will financial assistance in time of need
benefit
beneficial
to the economy in many ways.Suggestion
benefit
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