In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree?

It is common that most countries use people with light criminal
offenses
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offence
to participate in public services. Even though some believe that every convict should be sentenced
for
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to
prison time against their crimes, I would argue that it is essential to utilise them in
communical
concerned with promoting unity among churches or religions
ecumenical
canonical
activites
any specific behavior
activities
for a greater benefit.
Firstly
, sentencing all offenders into an imprisonment will make them anxious and stress.
This
is because it allows them to interact
with with
expresses the means used
with
other
prisoner s
a person who is confined; especially a prisoner of war
prisoners
whom may charged with serious crimes
such
as organized crimes and murder will impose a certain negativity on their mentality.
For example
, an athlete whom involved with
minor case
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a minor case
minor cases
of
drug
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the drug
may ultimately end up developing connections with convicts and might later
absorbed
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absorb
into crime rings.
In contrast
, if
such
lighter charged individual used in social
activites
any specific behavior
activities
instead
, it will be more beneficial for the society and
such
will improve their mind positively avoid involving in
such
bad activities
further
.
On the other hand
,
instead
developing correction facilities the related funding, which could be used in public welfare
such
as health care, education and social security as it is expensive to maintain correction facilities for every offender out of
government’s money
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the government’s money
. As a consequence, more taxpayer money will be needed in order to servicing and expanding prisons.
However
, if increase the use felons of lighter crimes in welfare activities, it will be
benficial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for the national economy by saving expenses as well by having free labour throughout to use in public
benenfit
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
. In conclusion, despite many believe that prison is the ultimate destiny for any breach of law and order, it is my firm belief that utilising offenders in social and communal activities will develop their attitudes and will
beneficial
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benefit
to the economy in many ways.
Submitted by Geeth Senaratne on

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