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In many countries,people throw away a lot of food from restaurants and shops. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away

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We are living in a world that many people have been suffering from
food
 shortage while many of them have been causing a great amount of
food
waste
 in a careless way.Not only
restaurants but
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restaurants, but
also
 homes have started to produce huge
wastes especially
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wastes, especially
 in developed worlds. As a matter of fact
,
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,
 people are able to meet their
food
 demands easily thanks to industrialization and technological advancements which causes
fast-consuming system
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the fast - consuming system
.Because of
this
 easy access
,
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,
they don’t think too much about
value
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the value
 of
food
 and they
can not
can not
cannot
 realize the steps from the farming to the plate of restaurants.
In addition
 to
this
,
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,
new generation
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a new generation
the new generation
 has not encountered harsh conditions
such
 as war or famine when they compared to their older ancestors.For
this
 reason, they can throw away
food
 without thinking twice. Following
this
, something should be done to reduce
food
waste
 as world population has grown rapidly and in the near future production of
food
 will not meet our demands.As a
first
 action,
food
 recycling may be considerable.
Furthermore
,
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,
people should be informed about
food
waste
 and its consequences by adverts and educational channels.Attributes towards
food
 should be changed.People should buy or order
food
 that they can consume without
waste
instead
 of hoarding. To sum up
,
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,
food
waste
 has begun to serious problems which have to be dealt with.Due to easy access and technological advancements
,
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,
the amount of
food
 which is wasted are increasing day by day.In order to prevent
this
,
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,
people should come to
realization
Suggestion
realize
 via tv programs and adverts
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overproduction
  • inefficient
  • supply chains
  • perception
  • disposable
  • replaceable
  • awareness
  • education
  • regulations
  • redistribution
  • donation
  • portion control
  • inventory management
  • public awareness campaigns
  • attitudes
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