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“some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids”. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Few parents consider day
care
 centres are great entertainers for toddlers whereas, some working parents think that children are better cared under the supervision of their
grand parents
a parent of your father or mother
grandparents
.
In
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From
 my point of view,
childcare
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child care
 centres are playing an advantage in the life of working parents. Nowadays,
childcare
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child care
 centres are designed to be flexible for parents having different working hours of day or night shifts. In
this
 period, child
care
 providers engage with kids in different activities according to their age which would build their IQ levels. Children get more active with these daily activities rather than staying idle at home.
Moreover
, they get socialised and make friends with different age groups of children. Childcare centres would help parents who don't have anyone at home to take
care
 of their children. Though they are
pricey they
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pricey, they
 have come up with teachers to guide children to do their homework after they return from their schools, which would not be possible at home. They provide complete services for children to get comfortable with their taste of food and
bed
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a bed
.
Also
, parents can assess their
childrens
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children's
children
 moments from time to time on
CCTv
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CCTV
 cameras by simply sitting
at
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in
 office. In my opinion, day
care
 centres are best entertainers for children having working parents.
Submitted by Harika Vemulapalli on

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