In some countries it is traditional for men to work and women to stay at home to look after the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In many countries, men are breadwinners whilst women have to stay at home to take

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of their families.

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situation has both benefits and drawbacks, in

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I will look at both. On the one hand, there are several advantages when women are stay-at-home

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children

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greatly benefit from spending

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with their

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and

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makes a sense of motherhood between

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and their

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, my mother regularly took us to

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when we were younger and told tales to us in the evenings.

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made us feel happy and loved.

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, women responsible for nurturing their

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means

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less financial burdens in terms of hiring caregivers or sending

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to child-care

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parents could use that money to buy what their

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need. What is more,

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who do not go to work will have more

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and energy to devote to looking after their

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, without having working -place stress.

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, the disadvantages of

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are clear to see. After a long period of taking care of families,

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are likely to

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themselves updated with

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knowledge.

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means that they may not be able to compete with young people who have more recent knowledge when

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want to find another job after motherhood.

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cost of living in some countries, it is better for both parents

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to work,

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it would be easier for them to buy things for their

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if there were two incomes. Being at home for a long

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and taking of

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also

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never be an easy job when

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have to encounter

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with

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some

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of their sons or daughters

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and

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to solve them could be a difficult job.

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, I was an aggressive boy when I was a child and sometimes, I injured my friends,

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made my mother miserable and there was a

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suffered from depression. In conclusion,

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parents and

children

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can benefit when

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do not go to work and stay at home to take care of their families, there might be more disadvantages for the family and

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in particular

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when they have to shoulder

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a huge responsibility of raising their

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