Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Other think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.
There is a popular belief that
third world
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third-world
countries
need financial support from international
community, Add an article
the international
while
other
think that assistance Fix the agreement mistake
others
as
medical products, educational programs and consultancy are more necessary. In my opinion, Correct quantifier usage
such as
the
help in the form of money Correct article usage
apply
shows
less practical than other types of essential aid and advice. It is true that economic solutions Verb problem
is
take
an enormous role in developing Verb problem
play
countries
. With economic aid packages, the
governments can use them to enhance technology and invest in scientific and technical Correct article usage
apply
researchs
to promote economic development and solve economic problems. Correct your spelling
research
However
, not all countries
utilize the external monetary flows efficently
, especially developing Correct your spelling
efficiently
countries
beacause
of their poor quality in infrastructure and labour force. Correct your spelling
because
Besides
, there is a big risk of receiving a large amount of money from developed nations since third world
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third-world
countries
do not have enough experience to use financial supports
to the fullest. Fix the agreement mistake
support
This
thing can easily lead to the
terrible debt. Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, I firmly believe that other forms of assistance are more needed. The explanation for my conviction is that society development makes economy
develop, Correct article usage
the economy
while
poor countries
have limited resources to tackle problems which are related to society, like education, health care, crime or unemployment. Therefore
, making use of utilizing in specific solution in each field is the best way. For instance
, experienced organizations can provide experts from all fields to developing nations to help them improve technology, develop education or solve social problems. With their useful advices
and Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
supports
, Fix the agreement mistake
support
third world
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third-world
countries
can absord
more Correct your spelling
acquire
morden
knowledge to advance Correct your spelling
modern
expertise
of human resources which play an important role as a core force in making society and Correct article usage
the expertise
econmy
better. In conclusion, I have a strong point that global help should come Correct your spelling
economy
in
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with
practial
aid and advice.Correct your spelling
practical
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