Task 2: Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

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There is a controversial concern about working as some people state that doing their jobs at

home

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is far more beneficial than working from

office

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the office

an office

. There are two main advantages and one drawback which will be indicated with relevant examples in

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essay. It is understandable that communication and information exchange would be difficult when people choose to work at

home

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. Employees are assigned new tasks on a daily basis;

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, not all of them are explicit enough.

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of asking directly the manager to clarify the mission or discussing with colleagues, people working at

home

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may face several problems

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as others are not available to contact online due to the internet connection.

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, it is likely unable to run

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teamwork projects due to the fact that members could not resolve unexpected issues immediately when they need the opinion and agreement

from

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for

all people of the team. On the flip side, workers could take two main advantages of not commuting daily which

are

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the transportation's cost as well as the flexible working hours.

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of all, doing their jobs from

home

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undoubtedly helps people to reduce the spendings on travelling back and

forth which

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forth, which

usually contain the public transport's fee or the cost of personal car's fuel.

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, working from

home

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does not require the time attending the traffic, so that it

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provides employees with time to prepare before starting to work.

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, people could actively arrange their tasks each day to balance between the working hours and time for family and other relationships. In conclusion, I stand for the view that the advantages of working from

home

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probably outweigh the downside. I believe the advances of technology would address the problem regarding ineffective communication soon.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

291 words

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Task 2: Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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Many people believe that using a bicycle as your main form of transport has a lot of advantages whereas others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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