Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Earth's
environment
is the main reason for our survival, and it is providing everything whatever we need to live. Due to the pollution,
deforestration
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
and many
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
of many human deeds today,
environment
Suggestion
the environment
is destroyed. It is now affecting humans directly by unexpected climate changes,
draughts
a shortage of rainfall
droughts
and floods, and many other diseases. Some
pople
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
say it is the government's responsibility to protect the
environment
, but other's believe that it is every individual's
responsbility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
. I personally believe it is everyone's duty to save
enivronment
Suggestion
the environment
environment
. Lets discuss both views in
this
essay. Every government decides what people have to do with
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
Thor
rules, so some people think that it is always the government that should take
care
about all things. Some governments are passing strict rules to stop
deforstration
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
, reduce the CO2 emission and encouraging
pople
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
to start
palnting
a geometric element that has position but no extension
pointing
tress. They
also
should take
care
of the
delcacy
the quality of being beautiful and delicate in appearance
delicacy
of the nature's
eco system
Suggestion
Eco system
ecosystem
that easily damaged. Governments should educate people about climate change and its consequences from the primary levels. They must stop giving permissions to the
minning
the act of extracting ores or coal etc from the earth
mining
meaning
works that damage ecosystem and take
care
of the forests. By improving laws and educating
people
Suggestion
peoples'
governments can save
environment
Suggestion
the environment
. Governments can make many laws, and can impose many rules, but it is the
responsbility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
of every citizen that should take
care
of the
environment
. Every person should accept that it is their duty to protect
environment
Suggestion
the environment
, so that it protect everyone.
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