Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that children should be encouraged to

participaten

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participate in

participate n

participate and

participate on

group activities in their leisure

time

, while others believe that children arrange their

time

by themselves is more necessary. In

this

essay, I will consider both sides of the

argement

a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true

argument

arrangement

arguments

and give my own point of view. Nowadays, there are many varied group activities, and parents bring

their

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

to take part in these

event

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events

to make them develop

confidence themselves

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confidence in themselves

.

For example

, when they join the event, they need to learn how to spend

time

together and get along with each other.

This

can develop their an easy going attitude and positive

parsonalty

the complex of all the attributes--behavioral, temperamental, emotional and mental--that characterize a unique individual

personality

traits.

Moreover

, they can

also

create their hobbies. The best example is when they through the activities to play or learn something they want. They are more likely to create the hobby in the specific

enveronment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

, because many events

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are also playing

are also played

also

play base learning, so

this

can make them are more willing to study and become a bobbies.

On the other hand

, some parents are more tend to allow their child to do everything they want in their free

time

and let them to practice how to arrange their

time

.

This

is

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has also had

also has

also

have some benefits.

For instance

, if children learn an arrangement of their leisure

time

,

this

can train them to know how to control the

time

and

a

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an

ability in well organized.

Addictionally

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Additionally

Educationally

,

this

also

can make them

know

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known

want they want to do. A evident is if parents organized the activity for the child,

this

may cause them

get

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to get

used to everything is already well organized by their parents, so they do not need to think about their life and make them dependent. In conclusion,

Although

there are some benefits for children learn to

organzied

create (as an entity)

organize

their

time

by themselves,

however

, I strongly believe that children should take part in some activities,

this

can

made

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make

them more likely to develop the positive

personal

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personality

traits and to build up their hobbies.