The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the olden days there was not many

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options compared to

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era. Nowadays, there is a possibility of choosing a

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and a pay check. Though some may argue that

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should be chosen based on happiness and

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satisfaction;

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, I believe it is the wealth that should be considered.

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with, throughout the years price tag for everything has increased. With these rising prices,

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needs a high

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to survive in

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world.

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,

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the price

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of bread in

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was 10 pence in 1900 whereas now its £1.

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is just a loaf bread which increased by 90%,

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however as

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however, as

the years will pass the prices will only climb. If a person cannot afford basic necessities in life, it will be difficult

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them to cope up with other bills.

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,

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satisfaction and happiness do have a role in choosing a

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, but with the rapidly advancing world,

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needs to think twice before picking a future with low

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. As

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grows up, not only an individual has to pay back loans, and

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tax. They

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have family responsibilities, which only increases their spending and if there is some money left,

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can think about having a vacation abroad. In my experience, I always preferred a

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with a generous

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is because I was on a mission to save money for

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the future

and that was only possible with a

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with a profitable

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, I realised that working in a high paying

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came with its own benefits while a poorly paid

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did not. To conclude, though

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satisfication

the contentment one feels when one has fulfilled a desire, need, or expectation

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plays a role in choosing a

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it is not as important as

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money, which

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is receiving at the end of the day.