Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

Experience and

education

are the two sides of a coin, both are

uncomplete

not complete or total; not completed

incomplete

without each other. In the modern era, People have different views regarding

this

some

to

Suggestion

of

them say that it is better

to done

Suggestion

doing

a degree from educational

instituation

an organization founded and united for a specific purpose

institution

institutions

for

handsome salary job

Suggestion

the handsome salary job

and other think that gaining the

experinrce

the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities

experience

experiences

from

Suggestion

of

work after high school have

more beneficial

Suggestion

more benefits

more benefit

. I partially agree with

this

statement. I Intent to

disuss

to consider or examine in speech or writing

discuss

my point of view in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, We cannot deny that

fact it's

Accept comma addition

fact, it's

little

Suggestion

less

easy to get

job

Suggestion

a job

after done a high level

studies

Suggestion

study

from well know university because people have placement opportunities and many companies prefer to give chance to well educated person. To cite an example, A study of London university showed that most of the multinational companies hire around 70% of

employes

a worker who is hired to perform a job

employees

employers

, Who has a

certificates

Suggestion

certificate

of higher qualification because a well qualified candidate have ability to do any

tast

trying something to find out about it

tests

.

Furthermore

, Getting experience after done from schools

also

have

thier

of them or themselves

their

own advantages

bcause

Suggestion

Because

Bcause

In the ancient times, People did not have any degree of certificate to prove their

slrf

your consciousness of your own identity

self

surf

for any job, but they

was

Suggestion

were

good in handwork the reason for that they have

experirnce

having experience; having knowledge or skill from observation or participation

experienced

or hand

skilles

an ability that has been acquired by training

skills

. To

examplify

be characteristic of

exemplify

, The many big major companies owner

do not have

Suggestion

does not have

any higher

education

, but the organizations still make huge amount of profit as the advantage of

experirnce

the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities

experience

. Like, Mark

zuckerberg

Suggestion

Zuckerberg

the founder of Facebook. To conclude, Getting

high level

Suggestion

a high level education

education

and gaining experience in early age both have their own benefits. It's the

competition

Suggestion

competitive

era we cannot

achive

to gain with effort

achieve

our goals

with out

in absence of

without

the well

educatin

Suggestion

educated

education

, but

education

is not complete without practice or

experirnce

the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities

experience

.