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being familly physician is a challenging job to what extent do you agree

#physician #job
Dear program director
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I am writing in strong support of
Dr
. Parisa Shabani’s application to the MLPIMG program to become a family
physician
 in Manitoba. I
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 Parisa since we worked together for about 7 years
in
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 Emam Sajad Clinic in Vavan, near Tehran, Iran. As a family
physician
 with more than 18 years of experience, I consider her to be in the top 5% of physicians with whom I have worked throughout my career.In the clinic,
Dr
. Shabani worked independently and visited
patients
 from different age groups. She performed routine office
care
managing
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 for both acute and chronic conditions. Her responsibilities included taking medical history and performing physical
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, ordering diagnostic tests and interpreting them, and prescribing medications. She
also
 counseled
patients
 on diet, smoke cessation and preventive health
care
, and requested screening tests. Parisa is a very kind and respectful doctor who really cares about her
patients
. Her
patients
 loved her and it was difficult for them to replace her with another
physician
 after she left the Clinic to immigrate to Canada.
Dr
. Shabani has extensive experience as a family
physician
. She is adept in physical evaluations,
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 plans and management of various cases. Her job experience has provided her
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 skill sets
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: • Carefully analyzing information
working
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 down the list of differential diagnoses • Clearly communicating with
patients
 about management
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 and treatment options • Strictly maintaining confidentiality of
patients
, their families
as well
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 colleagues • Maintaining accurate medical documentation She
also
 has a natural sense of leadership and knows how to partner with other health
care
 providers to assess the situation and coordinate activities to optimize patient
care
 and improve the health
care
 standards. She has a curious and caring personality and is committed to continuously updating her medical knowledge and skills. During our work together, she frequently took active parts in self-directed learning opportunities and participated in continuing professional development programs.
Dr
. Shabani is a bright and self-motivated professional. I am confident that she will be a tremendous addition to your department and can make you proud to have her on your team. I give her my full support and highest recommendation. If I can be of any
further
 assistance, please do not hesitate to contact me. Sincerely .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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