Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seen to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

Pollution is the biggest issue of concern. It is said by some individuals that these day
pollution has risen due to the industries and human activities
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There are various causes for
and it is badly influencing humans and my viewpoints will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.
To begin
cause of
pollution is that factories are
in all the countries as compared to
previous time
a previous time
and these industries throw chemical waste and garbage in the
of rivers, lakes and seas.
For instance
, a survey was conducted in India and its result was that seventy percent
of the river Ganga has been polluted due to the rise of industries near Ganga which is considered holy river of India
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Another reason is that some people do not have access to
so they use the
of river for washing cloths and for animal activities.
On the other hand
, it is affecting adversely the humans because they use
has become the reason of various diseases for humans which are damaging their liver and lungs.
, it is
damaging the animal life because when they drink
they die so it is affecting
eco system
the ecosystem
. To recapitulate, I would like to write that government should make some efforts to reduce the problem of
pollution in order to save the life of humans and animals
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contamination
  • industrial discharge
  • untreated sewage
  • agricultural runoff
  • pesticides
  • oil spills
  • microplastics
  • eutrophication
  • algal blooms
  • marine dumping
  • bioaccumulation
  • ecosystem
  • biodiversity
  • public health
  • waterborne diseases
  • fishing industry
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable practices
  • environmental regulations
  • waste management
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