You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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Dear

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Joffrey, I have recently stayed in your Marvel

hotel

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, for three nights. The temperature was unusually higher during

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period and unfortunate, the air conditioner in my

room

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was not fully operational. I am writing

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letter to complain about the bad experience I have had due to

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and would like to take steps so that it does not happen again. I checked into the

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at midnight on 14th July and directly went to bed.

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, after turning on the cooling system (A.C), I realized that the

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was not getting cooler and the temperature was quite high. Eventually, I called the

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staff to solve the problem, but they could not do anything.

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, no other

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was available.

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, I stay in

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room

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and open the window and rely on the natural air to cool my place. I had to sleep in skimpy clothes due to

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the heat. Noise from the street came through the open windows which disturbed my sleep. It was shocking and unexpected for me to spend a huge amount of money and yet experience three terribly uncomfortable nights. Perhaps you would consider refunding me some money and giving me

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if I ever come to your

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again.

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, fix the air conditioner system in every

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in your

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so that other guests do not suffer the way I did. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Pinky Vivek.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

245 words

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