More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

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via internet. So many

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a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state

corporations

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move out of an unsafe location into safety

evacuate

their staff working from

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rather than working

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anytime when they are

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obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service

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favourate

something regarded with special favor or liking

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time available for ease and relaxation

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move something or somebody around; usually over long distances

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all the way through

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be heavier than

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

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