Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while other think that group lessons are superior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Teaching can be done by many mediums. Among these methods popular are peer-peer coaching and group study.

However

, it is still debated which method is effective. In

this

essay, I will shed light on both sides of the argument and conclude

this

essay with my inclination. Affluent parents prefer to provide private coaching to their children. The decision of having a personal master has many cogent reasons

such

as, providing full attention, harnessing true capabilities and moderation in pace of teaching. It has seen that kid who takes private lesson secure better in the exams.

Also

, some students prepare for competitive exams and in order to ace these exams, they recruit the teacher for their child.

Suggestion

Group study

not onl

Suggestion

develop

y acedemic skills but social skills it will wholesome development

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

129 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while other think that group lessons are superior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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