Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some believe that university students have to
study
subjects related to science
and technology, which have greater
impact on mankind, Add an article
a greater
whereas
others believe that they should study
the subject
in which they are passionate. In my point of view, every subject
matter taught in university has implications in later life
as well as
for the betterment of society. However
, the statement has dual aspects which will be discussed below.
On the one hand, science
and technology have progressed rapidly and impacted our activity top
to bottom so Change preposition
from top
that
we can not deny the blessings. Correct word choice
apply
Moreover
, we have to cope up
with the advancement for not being old fashioned. Change preposition
apply
For example
, the computer has changed the world everywhere, so that this
is hard nowadays to find someone who can not operate it. If someone likes to study
in this
field, he may get success in life
which is undeniably a goal of life
.
On the other hand
, fields other than science
like economics, philosophy, the
arts are necessary to establish an enriched community. Correct word choice
and the
Moreover
, one can excel in something if he is passionate about that thing. For instance
, if Bryan Adams tried to study
on
subjects which are set by Change preposition
apply
society
Change noun form
society's
standard
rather than music, we would have lost a phenomenal musician. Fix the agreement mistake
standards
Therefore
, passion should be given more priority than the concern of usefulness in future.
To summarise, this
is apparent that science
and technology has much more exposure in our life
, but the arts and commerce are also
required to set norms, thought, ethics and belief of society. That is
why, this
is advised for students to give
focus on the Verb problem
apply
subject
as per their choice despite thinking about the usefulness of that subject
in life
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