Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.

Over the centuries human have coexisted with animals, as

result

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a result

results

today, we can witness domesticated animals being present in many homes. While others argue the safety of family members, particularly children as many newspapers have reported children mauled by

animals but

Accept comma addition

animals, but

I am at opine that pets harming people

is

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are

over emphasised and these actions are very negligible. Having pets at home

bring

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brings

positive attitude in children as they take care of these animals from the toddler age and having been raised together, creates

deeper bond

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a deeper bond

between them. For

instances

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instance

, a popular infotainment channel conducted a study for families with pets and without them in London. The main purpose of the study is to understand the attitude of children who grew up with pets and those who did not. The results showcased that

pet

owners had more compassion and helped to develop their cognitive skills as they perform

diverse range

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a diverse range

of actions

such

as grooming, feeding, medications and engaging in

paly

participate in games or sport

play

time.

Consequently

, children’s social and mental health were improved through exposure of pets. On the flip side, one might argue that pets are

threat

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a threat

to toddlers when left unsupervised.

This

is completely a false statement as

pet

behaviour is a direct effect of how the caretaker’s upbringing is. When a

pet

undergoes appropriate training at

young age

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a young age

it is well behaved even in the presence of infants.

Although

there have been occasional cases of exotic pets hurting children,

such

incidents are

rare

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rarely

or less significant as most of the folks keep dogs, cats and rodents as pets. To conclude, pets do enforce a positive impact on children psychologically

,

Accept space

,

family owing a

pet

is

good thing

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a good thing

to do.

Government

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The government

should introduce policies to prevent unethical breeding of pets and illegally using pets for tournaments and for monetary benefits in fights as these two factors contribute to trigger aggression in pets.