People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every nation has its own customs

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traditions and rituals

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It is said by some individuals that

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a person should

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stick to these

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because

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it is

really crucial

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to opt these in order to get acceptance

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in a new country.

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In my perspective, an individual must learn

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new traditions but he should not forget his/ her own

culture

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any person

migrate

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migrates

to a new country

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then he/she learns the language of that particular nation in order to get job

opportunties

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opportunities

there because without acquiring the knowledge of these

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it is impossible to survive in a new nation

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so if a person

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wants to get the complete acceptance

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and appreciation by other people,

then

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mandatory for him/her to learn those

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efficiently.

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For instance, one of my friend named Harkirat Kaur

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relocated

located

in Canada in 2014 and she had faced a lot of

diificulties

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difficulties

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in her

iniitial

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initial

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yeras

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years

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the

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job because she

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did not know

the

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another

culture

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therefore she felt lonely at office parties because

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she did not

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learn some of the basic

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cultural norms of Canadian society,

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but after

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year she realized the importance of these

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and

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gained the understanding of foreign

culture

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As a result.

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she got

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promotion and increase in salary after two years.

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some people

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are so much influenced by western

culture

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and they

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ignore their own cultural identity which is a loss to that particular community and country because it could become the cause of the loss of

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that particular

culture

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so it is the duty of every individual to save their own

culture

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To illustrate, a general survey was conducted in the year

of

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2018 and it had concluded that seventy

percent

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per cent

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people are responsible for the death of their own

culture

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I would like to write that people should opt

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new things but they must

rember

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remember

the roots of their own

culture

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