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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both views and give your opiniom

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It is a debatable issue
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 whether having a pleasant job is imperative in spite of earning huge sums of
money
 or leading a greater lifestyle by getting a decent income. I,
however
, opine the former view. To commence with, the masses who are with the
first
 notion assert that it is far more satisfactory to get a
work
 which an individual loves to do rather than getting a high salary because a person who does an enjoyable
work
 leads a stress-free
life
 and remains away from certain types of mental illnesses.
Furthermore
, by not getting depressed due to office
work
,
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 people may maintain a good relationship with their loved ones and spend quality time with their families.
Therefore
, opting a
pleasureable
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pleasurable
 job makes people satisfied as they do not live a busy
life
amd
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and
 remain healthy throughout
the
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their
 lifetime.
However
, others condemn
this
 notion by claiming that a proficient career is essential for a better living. The prime reason is that everyone in
this
 materialistic world admires to get a luxurious
life
. In order to complete their dreams, they earn a lot of
money
 by indulging in high paid jobs.
Moreover
, a decent salary is
a
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the
main requirement to live in cosmopolitan cities owing to the high costs of living. Apart from
this
, inflation is
also
 a reason due to which an individual needs
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a
huge amount of
money
 for living in the future.
For instance
, a person who wants to live in NewYork must be capable to afford a living in that city due to inflation rates. In conclusion,
although
 a good job is essential to
live
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living
 a better
life
,
but
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I believe that health and family are much more important than
money
 and a person must do a
work
 which suits him the best.
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