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Students from disadvantaged families and rural areas are finding it difficult to get a university education. Some people believe that universities should help them. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons...

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University
education
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 has become expensive these days and poor students have difficulty enrolling in.
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, some people argue that universities should help disadvantaged students to receive tertiary
education
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. I agree with
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 view.
Education
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 is the key to a successful life and career and as
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 everyone regardless of their financial situation or place of birth should have access to it. When poor students receive
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a
university
education
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, they are able to find better jobs and
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 elevate their living standards.
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, my
neighour
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neighbour
 is a daily wage earner. When his children graduated from high school with good grades, they could secure admission in a government college for a nominal
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. Today both of them have high paying jobs and they are
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 an inspiration for other poor students in the neighbourhood. Obviously,
education
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 bridges the gap between the rich and the poor and
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 helps to reduce inequality.
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, if poor students have to quit studies after high school, they will forever be doomed to live in poverty and that benefits neither them nor
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society. By offering free or subsidised
education
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 to students coming from economically or socially backward sections of
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society, universities can ensure that everyone has access to tertiary
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. In countries like India
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,
 the government already provides
fee
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 concession to meritorious students from poor families at
state funded
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state-funded
 schools and colleges. The government should extend the scheme to private universities as well by offering them some financial incentives for doing so. It should
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 consider enacting laws that offer a
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 waiver to academically brilliant poor students at all educational institutions in the country. Instituting more scholarships and stipends will
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 help. In conclusion,
education
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 is the fundamental right of all students regardless of their financial or social backgrounds. Universities should help them achieve it by offering them scholarships and
fee
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 waiver to poor and meritorious students.
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