Create an informative Vlog (video blog), to upload on the school Facebook page, that identifies and explains how selected texts represents an inspirational person that has overcome adversity. You may look at an inspirational person studied in class or another in consultation with your teacher. Your Vlog will explain how the text influences a reader’s perception of the human experience to create different perspectives of identity, place and events that inspire or are inspirational.

In the texts of the Biography of Anne Frank and the diary of a young girl, the
author
shows Anne’s
life
challenges of social, financial, and emotional
adversity
through language features.
First
, the
author
uses repetition of “Jew” and connotation words
such
as “segregated and discriminated against,” to show a clear idea of social
adversity
Anne had. It suggests that Ann was unfairly treated based on her race as a Jew.
Second
, the
author
uses the adjective “enough” to describe the amount of income Anne’s family received.
This
suggests that their financial well-being could not support Anne basic lifestyle.
Third
, the
author
uses a triples technique to show emotional
adversity
Anne faced. The emotion that she had face were “fear, boredom and confusion.”
This
shows that she went through adversities, which
also
indicates that not only Anne had faced physical problems, but
also
emotional issues. The
adversity
that Anne faced, represented the Nazis negative identity, attitude, and cultural assumption towards Jewish people.
This
is because the Nazis treated Jewish unfairly regardless of human right because of who they are. The texts
then
create
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a
different
perspective
of discrimination and cultural assumption as unacceptable actions in twenty-centaury.
In addition
, the
author
uses language features of simile and understatements, and text structures like punctuation to transcend literal meanings of
perspective
, creating inspirational images of Anne. By describing Anne’ personality as “shone through,” the
author
shows a positive identity of Anne. The word “shone” suggests that Anne is a bright light that still shines in a dark circumstance. It’s giving a
perspective
of being a self-positive image to overcome the
adversity
. During the journey, Anne understatements in her diary said, “The world has suddenly turned upside down. But as you can see, Kitty, I’m still alive.”
This
shows that
although
the state of Ann’s
life
abruptly shifted from the upper to wonder, she still remained optimistic and appreciate for being alive. Anne believed, no matter how hard it is in
life
, always appreciate a positive side. Anne Frank again said that the hiding house “may be damp and lopsided, but there’s probably not a more comfortable hiding place in all of Amsterdam. No, in all of Holland.”
This
punctuation shows that nowhere during the Nazis event were safe, which represented the Nazis negative identity and event. These perspectives suggest that we are not the only one facing problems in
this
world, and
thus
inspires us to have good self-awareness to overcome the
adversity
in our miserable lives
,
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while maintaining positive self-perception and self-efficiency. As you can see Anne Frank is a positive, resilient, and self-awareness person. She faced many
adversity
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adversities
such
as social, financial, and emotional. Still, she walked through any kind of disaster and shone through within herself. Her brightness and
perspective
in
life
have lighted the flame with us to be resilient, positive, and to get pass through
adversity
. The texts
also
influence our perception of human experiences of discrimination and cultural assumption as unaccepted in modern society.
Consequently
, the texts represented Anne Frank as an inspirational person
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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