Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem might such measures cause?

As we aware, that the earth consists of 2/3 water and 1/3 land.
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some people may believe that reducing consumption of protein-filled meals will be directly proportionate to larger land space eventually, others think that are may other ways of acquiring spaces. In
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onsumption of animals and the effects that
this
process may have on other things. Even though the
world
is divided between people who consume meat, others who prefer vegetables or vegans but the latter has the least number of count by far. Promoting, healthy living, eating and natural produces can be
one
of the approaches to discourage people from consuming high protein diets. While there are a lot of channels that promote that switching to eating leafy and green veggies are the way to live, there have to be other mediums of promotions too.
For example
, A recent study about a bodybuilder from Poland, Ivan Vastshchovic, who is
also
the strongest man in the
world
emphasizes that he does not include any eat meat in his daily meals, but he still has the strength of an Ox. Using people like these as examples can remove the myths in people's mind that only high proteins meals will provide excessive strength.
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people may want to switch to more natural ingredients that provide the energy as a roper nutritional source,
this
can cause a huge impact on the overall food industry if everybody switched to
this
diet. The domino effect of
one
industry not operating profitably can have a devastating effect on the economy.
For example
, the
world
consumes nearly 55 billion chickens per year, which makes
this
industry
one
of the most profitable industries in the
world
. Imagine, if the poultry business comes to a grinding halt, the impact would cause massive job losses, workers could be homeless and the entire pressure will be on the government to support these workers through the taxpayer's money. In conclusion, while producing meat may require higher land consumption, getting people to switch to a vegan diet may not necessarily achieve more space for all but it will only create more havoc for citizens.
Therefore
, I believe that
one
can only provide holistic knowledge about the right kind of food with its long and short term impact
however
what people consume is still an individual prerogative.
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