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Some people argue that if children behave badly their parent should accept responsibility and also be punished for the behavior of their children. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

#people #children #parent #responsibility #behavior
Parents children relationship is a kind of
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art, it has been developed in a right manner over a couple of decades. It was considered before, a child should be punished for his
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, so he could not repeat. Today, it has been changed and parents have a friendly approach to their young one's, but people argue children should be punished for the bad
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 of
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. We can have
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iscussion on both the views,
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 and foremost, a child joining the school could face
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two different types of teacher, a polite, soft natured and a strict behaviour. Children are scared of the tutor, who has
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ard approach and complete their assignments,
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 could shape them in a proper way, which helps them to have a bright future. As an example, in India students join National Volunteer Services should follow the rules and regulations,
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 them up in a disciplined way.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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