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You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the magazine Teaching S.A. This Job was posted by John Sullivan, the director of the Spanish department at a language school called The Language Institute.

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I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position as Spanish Instructor. Enclosed, with
this
 letter, is my resume, with
further
 details of my previous experience and qualifications. I have
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extensive experience in working as
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eacher. I have lived in Spain where I enrolled myself in a master course about
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panish language.
Moreover
, it was an excellent opportunity to enrich my background and be a specialist in
this
 language. I have taught Spanish for almost ten years, and my
last
 job was in a school named The Creative where I could teach numerous children and adults. I have
also
 taken classes to understand better the dynamic of teaching little students, in
this
 way, I am able to understand and assist them to learn a
second
 language with all expertise needed
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 I would like to meet you at the earliest convenience, to discuss the possibility to work in your school as a teacher. I can be reached at 444 935-879 during the days after 03 pm. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future.
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