You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Siddarth, I am writing

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letter with regards to my recent stay at your hotel. I must mention that we had a very pleasant service experience staying there. Though I had to write to share a few important things which need improvement and some

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things I found about our stay was, hospitality and room services were excellent. Rooms were quite well decorated and bedsheets towels were clean. While we had a bad moment of poolside where water was not clean , and we can clearly see some fungus inside water floors. Clubs were not managed and maintained well

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tennis ground was damp grass, in fact, my shoes got spoilt because of wet soil. Clearly, outdoor activities need

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for a good experience. I would like to give a few suggestions for

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, to hire an external contractor for refurbishments of clubs &

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for regular

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of services. And to maintain the surroundings , notification boards are necessary for people to know eatables or

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are not allowed .

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will help to keep clubs clean. Hoping these services are improved, maintained and having an amazing experience when we visit

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time. Regards, Girish Watwani