You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

Dear
Mr.
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Siddarth, I am writing
this
letter with regards to my recent stay at your hotel. I must mention that we had a very pleasant service experience staying there. Though I had to write to share a few important things which need improvement and some
maintenance
.
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things I found about our stay was, hospitality and room services were excellent. Rooms were quite well decorated and bedsheets towels were clean. While we had a bad moment of poolside where water was not clean , and we can clearly see some fungus inside water floors. Clubs were not managed and maintained well
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tennis ground was damp grass, in fact, my shoes got spoilt because of wet soil. Clearly, outdoor activities need
maintenance
for a good experience. I would like to give a few suggestions for
maintenance
, to hire an external contractor for refurbishments of clubs &
also
for regular
maintenance
of services. And to maintain the surroundings , notification boards are necessary for people to know eatables or
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are not allowed .
This
will help to keep clubs clean. Hoping these services are improved, maintained and having an amazing experience when we visit
next
time. Regards, Girish Watwani
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