Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs – need to feel challenged and also wanted more benefits describe your new job – whole new experience / I have never worked on it before / love it tell him/her your other news – next month I’ll travel to Europe

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Dear Anne, How are you doing? It's been a while that we don't talk and I've missed you so much. I'

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writing to let you know that I got a new job. You know that I was extremely disappointed with my old one, for

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reason, I decided that was the right time to find a new opportunity. I'

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so excited because I'

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pretty sure that I found my dream job. The company is awfully modern, we have games all over the place, it has a very relaxed atmosphere which helps me to be more creative, and I have a flexible schedule. I feel

myself

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free to innovate and to be proactive because my boss gives me autonomy. Another news is that I got

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one week vacation

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month and I'

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going to travel to London. Obviously, I remembered

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you because you lived there for almost one year. I'

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wondering if you could give some hints

where

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to visit over there. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Nayara

Nayara RastelliWed Sep 09 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

172 words

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