Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Several individuals feel that adolescents and teenagers should participate in social events whereas some feel that the

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is dependant on the

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to utilise. While both are equally beneficial that contribute to overall well-being, having an allocated

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to indulge on their own would pave way for

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relaxation from stress. By choosing to join in organised charitable events, children

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developmental and social skills.

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builds character and encourages positive values

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as compassion and morals to be

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inculcated

in these young minds.

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, by rendering assistance in nursing homes and through the social interactions that take place allows the

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to contribute to society.

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, through these activities, one could benefit greatly by having

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enriching programs for young people. On one hand, spare

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could be planned out and used to help destress through meditation.

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allows the

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to have

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on their own and to relax from the mounting, demanding schoolwork and

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is holistic as well. Research has shown that by setting aside 5 to 10 minutes in a day reduces stress hormones by 50 per cent and

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allows the

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to balance their emotion through

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mindfulness

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,

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and allocating a slot where children are allowed to destress is vital in recent times. In conclusion, while it is essential to contribute to society and develop character, having

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alone is equally vital for young minds. By having co-curriculum planned out efficiently, children would benefit greatly and would progress to achieving adults.