Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything else organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

It is often

this

thought that advertisements have played a huge role in creating unhealthy eating habits among children.

This

is because these adverts pester the children to buy

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products, eventually,by eating these

fastfoods

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fast foods

lead obesity. problems related to these can be effectively managed by the joint efforts of the

goverment

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government

and public. Commercials, which target

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children are hugely successful since they explore child psychology to manipulate their viewers. They include the cartoon characters, which is highly

influencial

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influential

, to attract children into their products.

For instance

, it is not uncommon to use child artist to play a role in adverts as they have been

favourated

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favourited

by many kids.By doing

this

, sugary drinks and highly fatty foods have been sold out in a large quantity. Since these items have less nutritional value, these have been

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to consume more

Consequantly

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Consequently

,

body weight

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will be increased, along with

this

many other health issues can be irrupted.

However

, these health problems are so prevalent, many governments, around the globe, actively seeking a solid solution to counteract the effects extensively. The

first

and foremost action could be banning the adverts which purposefully aiming the new generation.

As a result

, it is believed that children

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can be channelized into

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different

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iffrent direction.

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, including

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need

of

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healthy eating habits in school syllabus, would shed light into

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onsequences of processed foods into students mind.

For example

. in CBSE schools,

this

has been taught for many years coupling with physical exercise sections, which found extremely helpful to reduce the obesity in school going students. In conclusion,

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even though

commercials can be ubiquitous, with adopting certain strategies to minimise the

illeffects

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effects

ill-effects

ill effects

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eating pattern of the young ones may be significantly eliminated with help of authority to educate the students.