The most effective way to solve the current traffic and pollution problems in cities is to encourage people to move from the suburbs or countryside into the city centre. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of whether people should move from the

ountryside

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countryside

to cities to reduce pollution is a matter of concern for many. Critics argue that

this

notion can be useful in reducing the number of vehicles on roads and their toxic fumes,

however

, I believe the opposite.

This

essay will discuss why moving to a metropolis will not solve traffic and pollution issues, by using examples taken from Time Magazine and Australian National University.

To begin

, the main reason why moving to urban areas from rural ends is a terrible idea, as it can lead to

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ncrease in contaminant

air

in the

city

. A prime example, according to a ten-year study done by Time Magazine, there was a growing incline between the number of individuals relocating to New York and the number of automotive on the road. A surge in vehicles on the road has caused an expected surge in harmful fumes in the

air

by 5 folds since 2010. Based on

this

study, one can see that moving to a denser

city

is an awful idea, as it will only make the situation worst.

Furthermore

, to accommodate additional people in the

city

, the state would have to provide extra land, food, water,

air

, and fossil fuels, which will

result

in

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production of pollutants. To illustrate, research study piloted by Steven Dorve (Australian National University) observed that inhabitants of dense areas are using more energy than before compared to villages.

As a

result

, there has been a rise in the disposal of waste, and the factories demolishing the waste products are contributing 50% more than before to carbon emissions. So, if more people use more resources and create more waste,

consequently

,

this

will

result

in incline in

air

and water pollutants, toxic materials and greenhouse gases. To conclude from the aforementioned arguments, I firmly believe that moving to a

city

from the countryside will not solve current issues of pollution and

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apid

increase

in traffic.

Moreover

, it will only make the matter more dangerous, as a large

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of people relocating to urban areas will cause

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in

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ncrease in pollutants and automotives.