In many places, new homes are needed, but the only place available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What it your opinion about this?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Some people stress on the necessity of the architectural development in the suburban areas while
others
Replace the word
other
show examples
people contradict the same. As the cities are over-crowded, people want to build their homes in the
countryside
Use synonyms
however
Linking Words
, others think that
this
Linking Words
may result in
s
Add an article
the
show examples
poiling of the environment in the
countryside
Use synonyms
. In
this
Linking Words
essay, we will discuss
on
Verify preposition usage
apply
show examples
whether homes should be built in rural areas or not. Owing to the increase in population, urban areas are highly populated and expensive
thus
Linking Words
people who dream to build their new home choose the
countryside
Use synonyms
.
Further
Linking Words
, few humans feel that villages are more serene than
c
Add an article
the
show examples
ity and
hence
Linking Words
, they want to settle in these areas.
For example
Linking Words
, a friend of mine who is working in an MNC in Chennai, but still he has built his new home in the outskirts of the city to avoid pollution and the unnecessary expenses. In another hand, some people think that due to the industrialization and growing population in the cities resulted in depletion of water resources,
e
Add an article
the
show examples
ncroachment of lakes and rivers, improper disposal of wastes etc.,
Hence
Linking Words
, the people are against the structural development in the
countryside
Use synonyms
.
Moreover
Linking Words
, these people
does
Change the verb form
do
show examples
not want the urban population to build their homes in the village areas and spoil the environment like the city.
For example
Linking Words
, the article from environmental society suggests the government
to
Remove the particle
apply
show examples
allow only the construction of small eco-friendly homes in the urban areas to protect the environment. To conclude, sustainable development should be encouraged in
the
Remove the article
apply
show examples
rural areas and
also
Linking Words
the government should have stern checkpoints to protect the
countryside
Use synonyms
.
However
Linking Words
, the decision of not building homes in
Use synonyms
c
Add an article
the
show examples
ountryside is not a solution so people should be encouraged to construct their houses in the villages with proper guidance.
Submitted by Srinithi Ramesh on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Environmental conservation
  • Natural habitats
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecosystems
  • Disruption
  • Sustainable development
  • Housing density
  • High-rise buildings
  • Urban expansion
  • Renovation
  • Infrastructure costs
  • Local rural economies
  • Quality of life
  • Community cohesion
  • Noise pollution
  • Green space
What to do next:
Look at other essays: