Nowadays, some workplaces tend to employ equal numbers of men and women workers. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, the disparity between men and women in many aspects of

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as employment has become a serious issue in many countries. To prevent

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inequality, some companies tend to hire equal numbers of male and female employees nowadays. I personally believe that it is a positive development and

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essay will illustrate some plausible reasons for that.

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of all, hiring

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ame numbers of men and women workers can be a great chance for people to receive equal opportunities. To put it another way, we can solve

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glass ceiling’ problem with

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way of employment. According to an article

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newspaper, the percentage of women who felt that they were discriminated in companies because of their

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is over almost 70% in some advanced nations.

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, approximately over 90% of employees who are in high-ranking position is comprised

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man employees in the same given companies and nations.

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ignificant problem and it could be reduced by hiring

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of workers.

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, It can contribute to

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equality culture in our

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. If the number of

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kind of company which employ

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qual

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of workers increase, the

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equality culture will obviously be

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gradually in our

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.

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, Justin Trudeau, who became the Prime Minister of Canada, formed his cabinet with

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ame

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as 50/50

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. To answer the question of his bold action, he just said, ‘because it is 2015!’. The bold action of new Prime Minister

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influenced all the

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of Canada. As increasing the number of

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kind of figures, companies and organisations, our

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can reduce the inequality between men and women. In conclusion, it is true that people have different views when it comes to social concerns related

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ender issue.

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, In my opinion, employing the same

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ratio

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of workers can be one of

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ood solutions for

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discrimination in our

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. The harder we try to change, the healthier our

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will be.