In today’s job market, it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this question?

Nowadays, the working environment is changing so fast that people need to
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optimize
themselves by
knowledge
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the requirement.
However
, some people think that having practical skills are important to have theoretical
knowledge
, even candidates may not have any formal qualifications. I disagree with
this
notion. In
this
essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. Every
occupations
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need different skills and
knowledge
. The evidence is being a doctor, they need to have both of them. In my country, a student who
study
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a medical degree
need
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to spend 6 years with it. They have
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heoretical lesson for 5 years and 1 year to
practice
in
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ospital. Because
a
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professional
knowledge
and some skills are essential in
this
career.
Thus
, they do not just have a formal qualification, but
also
need to
practice
some skills.
On the other hand
, the requirement of some occupations skills are necessary and it is much more essential than the theory. The best example is some students who study in a prevocational school. In
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type of school,
practice
skills
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the most concern about.
This
is because prowess is more
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beneficial
for students
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work in the future,
such
as home care assistant, plumber and so on.
Therefore
, in the process of
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these course, some school provide a real environment for students to adapt and
practice
in order to make them experience the scene which can improve their adaptability in their position. In conclusion, while some jobs may
be need
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the skill more than the qualification.
However
, I strongly believe that
the
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theoretical
knowledge
is as important as the skill in some position, like
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octor.
Hence
, I disagree with job
applicats
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applicants
do not need a
qulified
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qualified
degree in the future.
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