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Many people believe that film is a less important art than other forms such as literature and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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nfromation of
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 figures in Japan. Overall, over the period of the time, the
population
 increased gradually and was the highest on 2005,
however
, after that year it started to shrink slowly and in the future, there will be a sharp decline.
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 increased in past and it will continue to do so according to the future prediction. Categorically, over the given time period, the
population
 in Japan was 84.1
million
 and elevated gradually. In 1970, the
number
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million
 and in 1980, it was nearly 15 millions more than
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1970. From 1990 to 2015 there was a plateau and
population
 were nearly 125
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However
, It is predicted that from 2035 the
number
 will fall steadily and in 2055 it will be 89.9
million
. Moving on to the other part, the
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 of elderly was less in 1950 and that was only 4.1
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 which were 4.9% of the total
population
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 of aged persons increased rapidly and it was around 25
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opulation belonged to them. It is assumed that the trend will continue to grow and in 2055, the sum of aged ones will be 36.5
million
 and in total, that will be just over than 40% among of the total
population
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • aesthetic
  • artistic expression
  • cultural significance
  • historical context
  • impactful
  • literary works
  • masterpiece
  • medium (e.g., medium of film)
  • narrative techniques
  • painting styles
  • pedagogical
  • perception
  • profound
  • technological advancement
  • visual storytelling
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