Many people believe that film is a less important art than other forms such as literature and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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nfromation of
population
figures in Japan. Overall, over the period of the time, the
population
increased gradually and was the highest on 2005,
however
, after that year it started to shrink slowly and in the future, there will be a sharp decline.
On the other hand
, the
number
of senior citizens
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increased in past and it will continue to do so according to the future prediction. Categorically, over the given time period, the
population
in Japan was 84.1
million
and elevated gradually. In 1970, the
number
crossed 100
million
and in 1980, it was nearly 15 millions more than
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1970. From 1990 to 2015 there was a plateau and
population
were nearly 125
million
.
However
, It is predicted that from 2035 the
number
will fall steadily and in 2055 it will be 89.9
million
. Moving on to the other part, the
number
of elderly was less in 1950 and that was only 4.1
million
which were 4.9% of the total
population
in Japan. In 2005, the
number
of aged persons increased rapidly and it was around 25
million
and one-fifth of
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opulation belonged to them. It is assumed that the trend will continue to grow and in 2055, the sum of aged ones will be 36.5
million
and in total, that will be just over than 40% among of the total
population
.
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