Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In today's modern era, education plays an important role in people lives. Choosing what to
study
and what not to
study
helps students in shaping their career in whatever field they want.
Although
some people believe that students should decide on the subjects they want to learn while others think that only useful subjects
such
as science and technology should be allowed to
study
.
This
essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why students should be allowed to
study
whatever subjects they like.
First
of all, when people say that university students should only be allowed to
study
out of limited subjects, they are actually limiting the potential of the students. No doubt that subjects related to science and technology will be useful for the students as well as in the development of the world.
For example
, 90% of the world's developments are done by doctors or engineers. Doctors have improved the medical standards of human beings and engineers have
also
raised the living conditions in the world bu constructions and technology. In my opinion, students should be allowed to choose whatever subjects they like to
study
or have an interest in. By not allowing
this
, students might leave the education in between as they did not interest in the
first
place.
For instance
, a student who is more interested in history or arts will pay zero attention in the class and might fail as well.
On the other hand
,if he was allowed to
study
history or arts, he might well have become some archaeologists or historian. limiting the number of options in terms of subjects might not be a good idea.
This
essay has discussed both the views in details.
Although
both the views have their merits, iI believe that students should be allowed to
study
whatever subjects they are interested in.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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