there is growing evidence that man made activities are making global temperature higher. what might be the man made cause of temperature rising how can we deal with this problem?

There is no doubt that atmosphere temperature is increasing globally. The main reason for

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is the excessive emission of poisonous chemicals to

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can be effectively controlled by reducing motor-vehicles on the road. On the one hand, currently,

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mission of carbon footprint is at an increasing rate.

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is mainly because of the number of vehicles on the road and which burn fuels.

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the earth cannot control its own temperature, since

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already damaged the layer of Ozone.

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, the results of recent studies showed that the damage is caused to the earth by poisonous gas is terrible.

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problem is promptly minimised by adopting a feasible strategy , which is a joint effort of

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world leaders.

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educate their citizens about the consequences of global warming and how it will impact on the future generation.

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to

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, by encouraging people to use public transports,

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of personal vehicles, but, at the same time, make sure the public system is efficient, reliable and cost-effective.

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, in Sweden, they have implemented share taxi and carpooling system to minimise

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umber of vehicles on the street, which was hugely successful. In conclusion, even though global warming is so evident, making necessary changes in the way people move around can solve the issue for a great extend. It is highly recommended that the authority ensures that the children of

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uture generation

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well informed about

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man-made problem.