Some people believe that all company decisions should be made by managers. Others feel that it is better to include employees when making decisions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, many organizations involve their employees in
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ecisions making
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. Some people argue that decisions should
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aken by
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that employees should involve at the time of
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share my point of views. On the one hand, managers have wide experience and vast knowledge pivotal for business expansions. They
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familiar with the
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of business operations and
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iversity of businesses and
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know
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ompany's strengths and weaknesses. The knowledge and experience
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them to
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decisions for
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of
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ompany. Some times the managerial decisions are not
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for their employees or some times that's
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create
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situation only for employees. To example, some
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take
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for
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lay off that
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is not
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by employees.
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, there are
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of reasons to participating employees in decisions making
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because they are the ones who pass information to the higher
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they know better from the
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about the ground realities of production or other concern departments. Even though
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orker feels more
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when they share thought and feeling for contributing organizations
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making.
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in Pakistan
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a survey conducted by textile magazine involvement workers in important decisions according to that survey 60% higher
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favor
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in
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nvolvement of worker. In my opinion, the
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should be
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with mutual understanding in any organization and
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must listen
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everyone voice but it should be
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for
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ompany's betterment. To summarize, there are many ways for
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decision making
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process
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,
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the involvement of middle level and
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employees are
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helpful for
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making
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decisions and that will give more effective results.
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