Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

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option which students are choosing in universities around the world.

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students enrolled nowadays and how it could affect

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society. There are some reasons that

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reason is the growth of the popularity of Information Technology. Due to the technology revolution

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the IT subject is attracting students for a

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market with more job opportunities and higher salaries.

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, IT campus request from the student less time of study and development than

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, developing a new app takes about one month and it could bring to the developer million dollars while developing a new vaccine

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students are enrolling in

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society. The main influence is less professional in areas

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global warming and environmental issues.

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to maintain our population safer. If there less professional studying theses probably mutation the result will be

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humanity taking the risk of news virus. In conclusion, the popularity of information and the fact that

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with less professional in

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Topic Vocabulary:

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promotion
opportunities
role models
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employment
gender stereotypes
societal norms
access to information
technological stagnation
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skilled professionals
innovation
healthcare sector
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global competitiveness
advancements
economic growth
public health services
environmental sciences
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