Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems. When they are not able to pay their debits back, do these advantages of credit card outweigh the disadvantages.

Advancement of technology gives us
credit
money in the form of
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redit
card
. Having a
credit
card
is need of hour.but it's used sometimes create a mistake. I reluctantly say that it disadvantages outright the advantages and how it spoil our life. Necessity is a mother of invention and that create wealth in form of plastic
card
and it becomes necessary evil when it is available in advance. No doubt,
credit
card
in pocket is a symbol of richness
nevertheless
if the fact
this
provides money against the insurance that you lend it with interest to authority.
For instance
, when we are in the mall and we come across an expensive product for which we have not sufficient fund with us, no need to worry if we have
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redit
card
,
this
will allow us to shop easily.
Moreover
,it provides us
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the facility to pay back in instalments.
However
, the above mentions facilities allow us to purchase whatever we wish but we have to lend it back with interest and
this
interest sometime become cumbersome for us.
Similarly
, it aggregates our tendency to purchase unnecessary things and we become factual to purchase these things.
Furthermore
due to its convenience anybody can take it's
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advantage if it will misplace by owner.
Although
,
credit
card
easily access money lender bank charge heavily fine when the borrowers unable to pay back on time.
Lastly
,it is a urse for middlemen because due to easily available of purchasing facilities, unknowing people spend more which is beyond their budget and become a headache. By seeing these disadvantages we can say that having a plastic
card
is more disadvantages than advantages. In conclusion, we can say
credit
card
is
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ecessary evil,
however
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it's cautiously use
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protect us from
it's
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disadvantages.but I firmly
says
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that it's disadvantages are more than advantages.
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