Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems. When they are not able to pay their debits back, do these advantages of credit card outweigh the disadvantages.
Advancement of technology gives us the facility to pay back in instalments.
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the
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is need of hour.but it's used sometimes create a mistake. I reluctantly say that it disadvantages outright the advantages and how it spoil our life.
Necessity is a mother of invention and that create wealth in form of plastic card
and it becomes necessary evil when it is available in advance. No doubt, credit
card
in pocket is a symbol of richness nevertheless
if the fact this
provides money against the insurance that you lend it with interest to authority. For instance
, when we are in the mall and we come across an expensive product for which we have not sufficient fund with us, no need to worry if we have c
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, the above mentions facilities allow us to purchase whatever we wish but we have to lend it back with interest and this
interest sometime become cumbersome for us. Similarly
, it aggregates our tendency to purchase unnecessary things and we become factual to purchase these things. Furthermore
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Although
, credit
card
easily access money lender bank charge heavily fine when the borrowers unable to pay back on time. Lastly
,it is a urse for middlemen because due to easily available of purchasing facilities, unknowing people spend more which is beyond their budget and become a headache. By seeing these disadvantages we can say that having a plastic card
is more disadvantages than advantages. In conclusion, we can say credit
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