Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Needless to say. Some people think the best method to relieve the growing traffic and

pollution

issues is rising

petrol

costs.In

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article, I intend to outline the reasons why I agree with

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idea and

also

provide

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way of solutions regarding

this

topic. To commence with, no one can argue with the fact that,

this

idea is one of the great solutions to prevent the developing vehicles and

pollution

issue.

Firstly

, rising

petrol

fees can reduce the driving rate. If

government

promote the price of

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petrol gas

petrol as

,

then

some poor residents must need to considering there financial

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to afford the

petrol

with a high cost every week .

thus

costly

petrol

lead individuals to think over not driving there own

car

every day.

Moreover

, which can change their minds to use public transport rather than driving

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own traffic. Is the fact that, if

petrol

fees are more expensive than public transport fees

then

people will select to taking the bus or train compare driving private

car

commute to work. Take my father as cases in point , when Taiwan’s

government

rose the prices of

petrol

, my father always changed his mind and take Taipei MRT to work because was definitely more economic than driving himself. Setting aside the above paragraph, there have

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several ways can effectively grapple with problems. At the

first

place, the

government

able to ban the

car

in CBD . So

that is

to say , people can only ride the bicycle or take a tram in the inner-city area in order to avoid the

ongestion

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congestion

ingestion

of transportation.

Hence

, the authorities prevent vehicles in urban areas can certainly solve congestion of traffic during

inpeak

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peak

in peak

periods. Meantime to reduce the air

pollution

in the city.

Furthermore

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overnment can encourage people to buy a battery-electric vehicle

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resolve the

pollution

problems . For illustrate, In Taiwan,if you purchase a Tesla battery-electric

car

then

you able to get some subsidy from the

government

. As the result, the battery-electric

car

is very fantastic and environmental technology, can help us to protect our environment. To sum up, make the

petrol

price higher is a great policy for our environment

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e better and

also

we can have a high-quality lifestyle.