Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people’s salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, some people are supporting the governments to take a higher part of their

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to finance public services, whereas others believe that high deductions from their salaries are not a good thing. It is true that there can be more development if taxes are higher.

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,

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is not always the case.

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essay will discuss why some people think there should be higher taxes and why

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think

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is not a good approach. On the one hand, there are some positives outcomes when people give a greater part of their

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to the

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.

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, there will be

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greater revenue available to pay for public facilities

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as schools and roads.

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, Australia

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as a country where people pay the highest tax rates in the world, but at the same time, it

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as one of the leading countries in education.

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happens because the

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has a lot of

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from the community taxes to invest in these projects.

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, there are a lot of people become rich because of the country' soil and resources. These people especially,

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a lot to the country, by paying

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igher amount of taxes, which is fair given the situation.

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, some people argue that their

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is not properly invested and that their

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is not enough to pay high taxes. In some countries, the

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prospects are not high enough to afford

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high taxes.

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, a recent survey conducted in Colombia

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shown that,

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minimum

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is not enough for people to pay their expenses, they

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to pay a significant amount of

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in taxes.

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, paying high taxes does not guarantee that the

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will be well invested. In fact, some presidents around the world have used the

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taxes for personal benefits.

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of investing in public services, they spend the taxes

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houses, travelling and expensive cars.

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, it is not appropriate to pay high taxes to the

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. In conclusion, from my perspective, people should pay taxes according

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their

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incomes and the

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should

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demonstrate

that the

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we pay is been used to pay the public services.