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In many cities, the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.

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camera
 is very popular in many majors cities around the world because of preventing crime .
However
 , some people hold the view that
this
 method restricts their privacy. In my point of view , the benefits of increasing surveillance cameras do outweigh the drawbacks.
To begin
 with, I regard the disadvantage of
camera
 installation as invading people’s individual freedom. They feel uncomfortable because of the fact that all their movements and images of their faces will be recorded . Paradoxically, I believe that it is necessary to fit up
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amera in public places to ensure
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 safety .
Firstly
, no dispute over how well the public cameras were on that day ! They greatly contribute to crime reduction by not only deterring crimes and thieves but
also
 helping in investigating their whereabouts .
For example
, according to the figure in 2019 , the number of crimes and thieves remarkably decreased in comparison with the same period
last
 year .Equally important ,
security
 cameras assist the police in their enquiries as crime detection. As many sources of information, via CCTV
camera
 , a dangerous serial murder was found by the police
last
 month and they successfully solved the large-scale bank robbery .
Last
 but not least , psychologically speaking , the beneficial effects of
security
 cameras do weaken the will to sin in the mind of man .
Thus
 , the government can more easily maintain law and order in their nation . In conclusion , albeit using
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security
camera
 in society is opposed , I still encourage CCTV
camera
 installation due to safe life.
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