Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a profession with a high wage, even if it doesn't appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with

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opinion and think that

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satisfaction is much more important than

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of all, I believe that

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pleasure gives people a sense of

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that no money can guarantee. Even if someone is earning a high

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, but feels tensed and compromises with his conscience,

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person won’t enjoy his life. While pursuing one’s interests will always bring pleasure and

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eeling of satisfaction.

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, a lot of famous researchers made their career choices

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not because of appealing wages, but because they were passionate about science. That’s why it’s more important to choose the kind of work that makes you happy than to look only at a high

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, doing what you like keeps you motivated and

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leads to

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career growth.

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, there is a strong relationship between

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satisfaction and productivity. People who love their jobs can easily excel in their fields of work and achieve better results than those, who put income in the

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place.

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, Henry Miller decided to leave his everyday

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despite a good wage and ventured to become a writer. And after enduring years of ups and downs, he became one of the most famous and well-paid authors of the twentieth century.

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, the advantages of jobs that keep you satisfied outweigh the drawback of a low income

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a long-term perspective. To conclude, I strongly believe that the

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's enjoyment is more beneficial than a high

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because it makes people happy and motivated.