You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the Landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter explain why you are writing ask for the return of your deposit inform the landlord of possible legal action

Hello, I am the previous tenant of your 32, Lake View apartment. My contract ended

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month and I am writing

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letter in response to your denial to pay back my deposit. Based on the contract, if I have met all the

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delineated, I am entitled to a full refund. Extending on that, before I handed you the key's, I had done succinct cleaning of the house,

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sure all your equipment were serviced and fixed the broken window in the bedroom.

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based on our previous discussion, the whole's on the walls were pre-existing when I moved into your house, pictures of which are attached. You could let me know about any discrepancies in the aforementioned details. As I have met all the obligations, I would like you to release the deposit, failing to do that would force me to take legal actions against you. As we both have known each other for 2 years, I don't want to go down that route and resolve

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amicably. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from you. Thanks and regards, Mike Ross

Nirbhay

Oct 1, 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

refundable deposit
rental agreement
amicably
tenancy
diligently maintained
legal proceedings
inspect
wear and tear
withhold
non-compliance
promptly
documented evidence
liability
small claims court
tenants' rights
non-negotiable
deadline
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You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the Landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter explain why you are writing ask for the return of your deposit inform the landlord of possible legal action

Many inventions by humans are considered revolutionary (e.g. wheel). Some people think that the most important invention is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think all university student should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?