You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the Landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter explain why you are writing ask for the return of your deposit inform the landlord of possible legal action

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Hello, I am the previous tenant of your 32, Lake View apartment. My contract ended

last

month and I am writing

this

letter in response to your denial to pay back my deposit. Based on the contract, if I have met all the

condition

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delineated, I am entitled to a full refund. Extending on that, before I handed you the key's, I had done succinct cleaning of the house,

made

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sure all your equipment were serviced and fixed the broken window in the bedroom.

Also

based on our previous discussion, the whole's on the walls were pre-existing when I moved into your house, pictures of which are attached. You could let me know about any discrepancies in the aforementioned details. As I have met all the obligations, I would like you to release the deposit, failing to do that would force me to take legal actions against you. As we both have known each other for 2 years, I don't want to go down that route and resolve

this

amicably. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from you. Thanks and regards, Mike Ross

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6 paragraphs

184 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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refundable deposit
rental agreement
amicably
tenancy
diligently maintained
legal proceedings
inspect
wear and tear
withhold
non-compliance
promptly
documented evidence
liability
small claims court
tenants' rights
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